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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Firstly, originality. I have to say, I can't give you a very good rating on this one, as the focus, style, and atmosphere of the picture have been done countless times. If you wanted to spice it up a little, I might suggest using a different flower other than the generic cherry blossom, and maybe changing up the poses.
As for vision, I think you had the right idea in evoking the pleasant feeling of spring and summer. But here's where vision bleeds into technique; the anatomy of the characters is inaccurate, the use of negative space is a bit amateurish, and the color is choppy and inconsistent. Now I don't claim to be an expert--I'm anything but--but I can't help but feel that this could definitely have been done better.
Impact has a strong tie to originality, so I can't really give a good rating on it either. When I look at this, my interest just isn't piqued at all; like I said earlier, it's a case of same old, same old.
Overall, it's a cute picture! But I would work a little more on your execution.
The Flowers are beatyfullare they saruka's? to me they are beuase i used to see them where i come from as i misse them every spring time.
I dont what to say know beaucse i have put it up above so yeah i hope you do more in the new year and have a happy new years with frined and faimly unitl then keep up the good work =] Cheyenne Simon
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